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School girl crush

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School girl crush

She asked,
girlfriend #1,2 or three
what number am I?
Don't you love me?
All the other girls
break your heart.

Will you be my one love?
My one and only?

Say, "I love you"
From me to you is weird
From you to me
is a dream come true.
 
3 is a crowd
1 is lonely
2 is just right.

When our eyes meet
I know it is not just fate
for us to be together
it is destiny.

I didn't believe
in love at first sight
until I met you.

For my eyes
I see only you
Just to hear one day
that you love me.

You and me = one big happily ever after

She said
love is a fiery torch
love is war
and love is hell.

I will steal you
from your lady.

You want me to love you?
your wish is my command...

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 9:09:00 AM

    Ken Great write. The reader can feel the intensity of your crush and the hopefulness the feelings are returned. Nice job Have a great day

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/19/2013 9:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Robin, Thank you for a lovely visit.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 5:58:00 PM

    Fantastic write buddy. Some how I cant seem to recall my first crush...lol.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/10/2013 6:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks M.M. my close friend..
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 9:52:00 AM

    Love is hell....so true but also amazing when your in it with a person that feels the same. Terrific write. Hugs

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/7/2013 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Cecilia..
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:42:00 AM

    first hint of romance will never be forgotten, ken... charming and truant at the same time.. i like!..:) huggs

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/6/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Nette, Thanks for visiting.. Ken
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:37:00 PM

    Very interesting write....ah....a crush...you portrayed it well. :-)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/4/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Eileen, thank you for reading this one..
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 2:25:00 PM

    - Sweet time... and sweet poem, Ken ! - - Have a beautiful weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/4/2013 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, Thank you for the beautiful comment.
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 12:29:00 AM

    Great passion in this one. Nicely written. Straight from the heart. Great job! Always, Laura

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/4/2013 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Laura, Thank you for visiting..
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 4:22:00 PM

    Love the romance in this one big time!! Nicely done. thanks for stopping by my work. Hugs, Gail

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/3/2013 4:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Gail, Thanks for the visit. Ken
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:58:00 PM

    lovely piece of writing as usual my dear friend

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll Date: 10/3/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hey Liam, Thanks buddy. Ken