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The Window Pains Questionku

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Below is the poem entitled The Window Pains Questionku which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Window Pains Questionku

Crossing the room
at breakjng heart's beat
Who's banging at my pains

Blue notes and rains
crash my window panes
Is it why bluebirds cry

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:31:00 PM
    This is a cool form; I need to better familiarize myself with it. Enjoyed! :)

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/27/2013 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm happy you like it! This form has been invented by Richard Lamoureux; check out: he's really THE Master. Adding rhymes to it could be your own special style! And these archaic expressions too! Could really be VERY unique!
  1. Date: 10/13/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Superb!!!!!

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:21:00 AM
    You have mastered my form Hanitra! These are moth outstanding pieces.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/7/2013 2:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Still learning, my friend; and needing your comments more than ever! Don't forget our big PoetrySoup Web Writers Webdancing Party to celebrate your success story!
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:19:00 AM
    You have honored me once again by your lovely spirit and presence. Thank you Hanitra. Blessing on you and your household.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/7/2013 2:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot, Rick! Very much appreciated!
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:29:00 PM
    Hi Hanitra, all your kind visits today brightened my heart. Thanks and many hugs!

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/7/2013 3:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're always welcome at my place, dear Bearded Poet Friend of Mine ...even if I wouldn't show up much too often! Keeping on reading your wonderful texts even when I can't comment...:) Blessings and Hugs, Hanitra
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:50:00 PM
    I like your questionku very much... never viewed a blue bird crying... amazing imagery...linda

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/4/2013 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello, beautiful lady! On my way to read your latest poems again! Thanks a lot for the read!
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:18:00 PM
    wow, I think you must be a quesionku expert Right away I come to your poetry and see you have many of them!! this set is good. And about your chocolate.YUM. wish I could taste it(actually I love popcorn even better than chocolate. I'm more a salty than a sweets lover, but I sure enjoyed writing about chocolate).

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/4/2013 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Not as good as some others, especially our friend Richard Lamoureux who invented the form! I like the intensity of this particularly concentrate form...Makes you feel and try a lot of possibilities before choosing the preferred one; Pretty tough but my passion!!! :)