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Election Questionku

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Below is the poem entitled Election Questionku which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Election Questionku

Caught in a coat
too tight on my throat
How could I sing a note

Caught in a boat
that would never float
How should I give my vote

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  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:23:00 AM

    I like how you have added Rhyme to the Questionku.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/7/2013 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    For that one, it was a sudden flow! Perhaps too much anger and rage and fear in a long, long silence that needed to be broken. Everyday smiling gets harder and harder.
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:19:00 PM

    I especially liked that first one. it was very clever.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 10/4/2013 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for taking time! Presidential elections ahead; I hope it won't come to civil war...