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Alone with My Thoughts

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Alone with My Thoughts

Alone with my thoughts-
My Mind concocts
A thousand, million, billion dots
Connecting through my Brain

Colors spread through the depths of my Head
Then I wondered, "Am I dead?"
For no one ever said-
The Truth could hold such pain!

*An old experimental type piece written on LSD; the rhymes are meant to be irregular (I suppose lol)

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  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:06:00 PM
    Chan This is very deep and powerful. Its gripping and emotional. But I am trying to ignore the LSD remark and call you a bad bad boy. HEE HE Glad you liked my Taking A Chance poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 11/3/2013 10:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Gotta cite my influences sometimes, Sweet Pea! Thanks for stopping by <3
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 11:09:00 PM
    I really like this. I hope you didn't take too much of that LSD. I heard it had some really bad affects. anyway, Paul Mcartney still seems to be doing ok. So it was really great going thru your poems looking for some themes!! Good night to you.

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    Date: 10/11/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Andrea. lol I don't do acid anymore; I'm getting too old for that sort of thing. Thanks for dropping in and for the reply :)
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    Date: 10/4/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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