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Debbie Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan - LIFETIME Premium Member Debbie Duncan - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Forgotten

Forgotten heart of mine.
Forgotten souls in time.
Teetering along the fence of time.
As  prisms sparkles thru the night.
The moon glistens on the weaves.
Volcanoes  erupting  thru the night.
I smell the taste of honey on my lips.
Passions controlled by what was once felt.
She has become the desire within his veins.
The forgotten dreams of his heart drip blood.
As they were dropped along the way. 
The heartbeat of their love was left out in the rain.   


12:30 mid-night 9/ 17/ 2013

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  1. Date: 2/16/2014 9:01:00 AM
    What make's someone forget their heart. And cause their lover to depart. The lonely know only too well. What heaven's like, yet still live in hell. Beautiful poem Debbie. Peace. :)

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:18:00 PM
    "The heartbeat of their love was left out in the rain"... super poem, Debbbie... Terry

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 11/6/2013 11:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Terry ;}
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 4:14:00 AM
    forgotten soul immersed in time, being born till death sublime, not too sure what was my crime, but we will endure it, fine....until... 7th level, sings n chimes... great poem babe....

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/27/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you , yours is so much better then mine ;}
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Forgotten.... I think not. Your pen with take your talent into eternity.... Great writing..... Jake

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/22/2013 6:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you John ;}
  1. Date: 10/16/2013 11:44:00 AM
    Love this poem! -Patrick Farley IV

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/16/2013 2:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Patrick ;}
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 4:03:00 AM
    You are not forgotten: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR B-DAY 07.10.2013, DEBBIE!! ..... (better late than never :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/9/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne very much ;}
  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:25:00 AM
    Had to read that last line twice. very good ending on your heartfelt poem.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 10:08:00 PM
    Felt passion - sadness - loneliness... great poem Debbie....and happy belated birthday!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:39:00 AM
    heart wrenchingly lovely, debbie...farewell is such a lonesome proposition... simply marvelous!..:) hugggs

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/8/2013 7:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you nette ;}
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:28:00 AM
    I have been away for a while myself. Sometimes, I suffer a bit of stagnation. Anyway, you have a style where you change point of views in the middle of your poetry. This always keeps me on guard and makes me have to re-read your work several times to be sure I know what is happening to whom. Then I also go back to the title. The nature of forgetting is difficult to fathom. I think you are right that it is filed away in some form. I also like the fitting praise you give yourself in this.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/5/2013 2:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well hello Duke , thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:36:00 PM
    Debbie, amazing lines and words.... what a sad feeling when love is left in such a way... your pen is deep... always...Linda

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/3/2013 9:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda ;}
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Favorite line among many: 'Teetering along the fence of time'...Passionate, stunning and absolutely beautiful piece...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/3/2013 8:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tim ;}
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:11:00 PM
    you painted out from the heart beautiful

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned in this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..God is good despite things not being good sometimes..We are okay..The is site is still moving slowly because of the work going on to make it better..I hope that all has been good in your life..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 7:43:00 AM
    So sad...what a pity for those who do not know how to appreciate something so worthy. Excellent writing & tone.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/3/2013 10:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Drake ;}
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:57:00 AM
    - Debbie, well written,with touching words ! - All the best to you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 10/3/2013 11:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne - Lise ;}