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PHARM Fresh

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PHARM Fresh

A little chalk ring 'round my nose,
Sends me into Pleasure's throes
Another line, I'm feeling fine
Providing that the Powder flows
Peach and blue and green and white,
Only then when Life is right
Liquid Love my veins to flood-
Burdens gone; my shoulders light
Euphoria swims through my blood
Troubles out of mind-- and sight!

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  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:14:00 PM
    Chan This is the most honest and powerful piece I have read of yours so far. It is insane how real this is. Makes me feel like I am there doing it with you. Nice job Glad you got the message I was trying to say in my Technology poem. Hugs my friend

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    Date: 10/26/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, sweet pea :) This one is pretty raw but, as you know, I'm very candid about my addiction issues. I enjoyed reading your poems yesterday :)
  1. Date: 10/10/2013 10:40:00 PM
    I never did this. Wonder what it would be like. Good one.

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    Date: 10/11/2013 7:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    "DO NOT try this at home!" lol. Be thankful you never did it; addiction is a terrible plight. Thanks for the review :)
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Raw to the bone. Close up. Almost like you are there. Incredible craftsmanship.

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    Date: 10/4/2013 7:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Beverly. I am almost painfully honest and candid when it comes to my addiction. I know it's not something to which everyone may relate, but it's an integral part of who I am, for better or worse (usually worse lol). Thanks for the read, reply and compliments; I sincerely appreciate it :)