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dough nuts

To those who daily sit and eat
A sweet and sugary doughnut treat
Beware, the calories they pack
Contributing to a heart attack
As waistlines grow - and belts resized
"dough nuts" will soon be hospitalized

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  1. Date: 10/27/2013 8:57:00 PM

    This is a fun story with such a great last line. I'm more of a pastry nut since my wife's a baker.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/28/2013 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. You are one lucky guy.
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 5:08:00 PM

    So much truth in this cute and funny write......I'm a health nut and rarely eat dough nuts. Good one Jon! Hugs

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/21/2013 10:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks
  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Well done Jon. Sugar is so sweet and so bitter

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/21/2013 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    very nice play on words
  1. Date: 10/8/2013 12:09:00 PM

    Very clever, Jon, loved it!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/9/2013 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:06:00 PM

    haha, love your play on nuts that like dough!!! Wish I could see more of your older poems today but I've made myself late for the gym tonight. See ya, my friend.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/3/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:13:00 AM

    Don't know if you meant for this to be comical or not, but it gave me a chuckle. Fun read, and true! Thanks for sharing; kudos. Enjoyed :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/2/2013 10:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My type of humor. Glad you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:49:00 AM

    - Dangerous, dangerous .... but lovely, lovely .... - Wish you a nice and happy day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/2/2013 11:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you dear one.