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The Rose

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The Rose

Atop The Table 'an empty verse' and empty hands ~understand~ The glass in hand can drown out ten- thousand and ten; Hearts, ~emptiness~ ' ' looking for ? a f l o w e r '' '' ' ' ' " " , ', ', (Oh, Holy Nights) on bend-ed knee enlightened to see, Ten Drops from the Glass < << < << < << < I ponder great love and then I let it go (Boomerang) Hands, (the) Masters Hand * * * * * * * * * A parade o'er Parodies' "'atop'" "The Table" Inspired by a reply to comment: 3/6/2012 ~ "Slowly Ascending The Steps Unto Once Upon A Times Familar Front Door~ Seems As Though But Yesterday When It's Newness Held Such Vibrancy, Colours & Laughter~ Love Filled The Hallways Leading Into Many Different Rooms; Some Were Hidden~ A Vacancy Sign Now Posted Upon The Curtainless Window; Inside My Heart~ Spring Melting These The Last Winters Remnants Of Snow Left Amid The Blizzard~ Winds Whispering Through The Trees; Flowers Bending In This Their Wake~ With A Single Rose Sitting Atop An Empty Table Past The Glass, Aside A Note~ Time, Beckoning From The Street; Leaving A Bottle Of Champagne At The Threshold~ Wrapped With A Red Bow And Turning To Make My Way; Beyound The Rainbows." Love John!:)

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:09:00 PM
    Cindy, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 11:02:00 PM
    wow..this is awesome... . CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 5:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Very Creative work..Way to go!!!Sara

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 5:44:00 PM
    So, Did I Actually Write Any Of Those Words Noted At The Conclusion Be This Your Lovely As Somewhat Fascinating Within Creative's Verse, Sweet Precious Lucinda Price ? If True Then I Am Going To Pretend That I did And Post It With a Slight Brush Today ~ Love The Layout And Have A Very Beautiful Day ~ A Rose At Her Threshold, And Here We Wait, Love, John

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 3:29:00 PM
    the art you give ! Beauty inside you, and outside.

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 9:33:00 AM
    A creative write, Cindy! I enjoyed both the poem and presentation...very inspiring. Congrats on your winning placement! Have a great day...Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Cindy

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:16:00 AM
    Written just as a poetess should write. Congratulations on your win.... Love ya ... Jake

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Poet / artist together perfection, congrats on your win xxx

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Cindy, congrats on your victory in my contest! :) G.

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 5:39:00 PM
    Well, I got it then!!! Of course there is a vase there too. I love how you made that shape.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Cindy, I see love, John at the end of this one. What was this all about? I sure liked the representation of the rose you made at the top. and interestingly, the bottom part could be a small table!

    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu
    Date: 10/4/2013 2:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's a rose, in a vase, on a table.. and on my part I was reading parables from the Bible atop the table. John commented me long ago, his part speaks for itself...
  1. Date: 10/2/2013 10:41:00 PM
    Don't confuse my patriotism with princes we haven't paid. We have princes we've paid yours and mine. In ancestors. God will make things right without casinos one day. Just wait.

    Lu Avatar Cindy Lu
    Date: 10/4/2013 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    There is more than courage wuth my patriotism. There is always a bit of sadness that goes along with it with me.. you can call me a girl if you want ta but seriously, isn't there ??
    Situation Avatar The Situation
    Date: 10/2/2013 10:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your sadly made me reach out to you.
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:58:00 PM
    Beautiful, mysterious and daring. Enter the contest. G.