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The 21 Guns Questionku

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The 21 Guns Questionku which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The 21 Guns Questionku

This heart is broke
Nothing more to give
Lord, should I let it be

Losing my pride
Nearly lost my faith
Lord, why should it just be

21 guns
And their bells tolling
Lord, help me let it be

The queen was dead
Longer lived the rose
Lord, what's in store for me

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:33:00 PM
    Loved the last stanza, especially. Enjoyed this one, too. Kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:33:00 AM
    Outstanding!

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/7/2013 12:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi; Rick! Just thought of you and your success story , especially with "Dancing coins", together with Eileen! We shouldhave a big Poetry Soup Web Writers Party to celebrate all this! Hugs
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:24:00 PM
    these are very good. Profound ones.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/4/2013 3:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for taking time reading my questionkus; your comments are very important to me! Blessings!
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Reminds me of Madagascar- the movie!

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:44:00 PM
    Poet with the shortest name, thank you for sharing your poetic thoughts.

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
    Date: 10/1/2013 6:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Gerald (^_^), you can call me Hanitra!