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     Have you ever thought of This ?
    Maybe it could take you to a state of Bliss ~

    Now that you have it how are you going to keep this?
    You know This is something that you will Miss ~

    This that you'll miss in all Bliss
    Maybe it is the warmth of my kiss ?

     Don't even think about This 
     For This is not for the taking

     This Kiss
             Bliss
                  you will always Miss ~
                      must be dismissed .
        
        This was initially going to be a song , it did not go there !            

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 10:07:00 PM
    You should have made it go there Shanity!!! I'd love to hear this put to music, you have to let me listen Yvette!!! :D MC

    kelley Avatar mark kelley
    Date: 11/1/2013 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    MC ..I need to fix this !! That is not shanity !!
    kelley Avatar mark kelley
    Date: 11/1/2013 1:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I needed help with this one !! Maybe I'll try again , yes..it is suppose to be a song , yet not that other song "this kiss "