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Rhyme Time

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Rhyme Time

So you would like for me to write a simple little rhyme It seems that's what I'm doing, with most of my free time For some my rhymes are always something so sublime Though I may have finely began, to reach my all time prime With a feeling that I can rhyme with just about any given word Probably even come up with one,that also rhymes with turd To some my rhymes may sound a little bit too absurd Or they may even be, the best ones that they've heard Some people think that rhyming can be so much fun But maybe then to others rhyming just seems a bit to dumb Possibly to them then the words they just won't come Though that's not the case for me because I feel that I'm the one It's like the words come to me in a song that you can sing Putting the words together for me is no big thing I'm not some no name big shot busting out with shiny bling Just a small time lowly poet, who is trying to follow his dream I hope you really like the words that I have rhymed For they were indeed the only ones, my poetic heart could find That's what I use instead, of silly words from my mind Thank you all for reading them, you've been nothing but most kind
9-30-13 Contest: Rhyme Battle By Juli- Michelle

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:35:00 PM

    Dan,, congrats with your winning poem in the rhyme battle.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 2:08:00 PM

    Dan, a BIG congrats on your rhyme battle win! This was fun to read!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:31:00 PM

    Dan, awesome rhyme battle win.............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:49:00 PM

    loved how you wrote to me! Congratulations on your honorable mention in my contest, thank you for sharing your poem with me. Love, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 2:56:00 PM

    nicely done Dan ;} I haven't been on for a while. so it's always nice to read good poems ;} have a fab day ;}

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:14:00 PM

    one big poetic delight from you,dan... this flows like honey sweetened by a fine pen!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:56:00 PM

    - S-Mail - oxox // Anne-Lise :)))

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 2:39:00 AM

    If it were me that this rhyme penned I would have changed the 'where' In the fifth stanza that I had penned To some other word like my 'were' Then I would have loved to read it again And again that rhyme that I had penned When I had looked at it more closely again!

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 10/1/2013 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Gerald... I missed that typo? I read it over 3 times and still missed it. :o)
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 9:16:00 PM

    The expressions flow from your heart like your rhymed lines, Dan

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 9/30/2013 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much Dr.Ram. :o)
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 2:30:00 PM

    - You're good at rhyming Dan! - (I rhymed best in Norwegian!) - Enjoyable poem to read! - Thank you my f.e.f. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Kearley Avatar Dan Kearley Date: 9/30/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you... I would like to hear some of those Norwegian rhymes! I'm sure they would sound great. xoxo f.e.f :o)