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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 5:33:00 AM
    - A beautiful poem that is skilled written, a special poem from you M.R.!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:03:00 AM
    Great Zeus! Y'all sure rocked MY caboose...This could be a song lyric - Tim

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:39:00 PM
    You two really do blend together rather nicely, you enmesh truly wonderfully! This is a special write written by the both of you! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:57:00 PM
    thank you for the train ride. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 3:34:00 PM
    Oh my darling Mystic what a realistic poem you have here! So good, so true and it flows so well! I love it! Let us go together on a train ride cross country to a sunny paradise and write poetry together on some lone sandy beach, as we get drunk on red wine and watch the tide come in and the whistle of the evening train go by! Very lovely write my darling Mystic, :) xoxo hugs and kisses all around for you my dear.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 1:05:00 PM
    ohhh, i like how this just floats with such lovey-dovey feel, vie... you and liam simply mesh!... right on!..;) huggs

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 11:59:00 AM
    now that train is whistling beautiful

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 10:38:00 AM
    I liked this write and the combining of your words a blending is what I call it. Thank you for sharing your work and comment s on mine. keep it up

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Enjoyed this light piece of poetry and the metaphors you use---hmmm... trains can be a fascinating mode of travel :)