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Broken Fortune Cookies

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Broken Fortune Cookies

While some of Sally's fortune cookies are broken into bits;
it's easy reading fortunes when their open in the blitz.
She saves them for my rainy days or so I'd like to think.
It's how to run a business when you serve one with a drink.
I tell her all my fortunes are always coming true.
More importantly their tasty and very good to chew.
She knows I don't need luck; that her cookies are a treat,
and sees me wash them down with a coffee extra sweet.
And with the cookies and their luck thirst will come to me
as Sally goes with friendship like a coffee or a tea.

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 3:56:00 PM

    fantastic last line....and the rest of the poem shows a character with a loving and kind nature...Lucky Sally!

  1. Date: 10/16/2013 2:35:00 PM

    aw, I love this, especially that last line! wow, I'm so glad you commented on my little poem today, so that I can discover your unique poems. :)