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  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Ouch..Tnk God its fictional ..It transmit so much emotion though.Its so sad when two live but not love together.To respect and two love such a fine line between them but so much difference. To start anew..or maybe renew a relationship which was once new.I love this song tickles the core.

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 7:57:00 AM
    Cool !! Enjoyed this lyrical choice of words-- now you just have to write the music for it-- anything, as long as it's not RAP :)

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 12:49:00 PM
    very well written lyrics, dear Craig. Love this one. hugs, Catie :)