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Moon War

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Moon War

This is as simple as it gets
The truth displayed on blank pages
Lies on the written ones
For you, for me- the wages
From fighting this war are meager
And it seems that we are eager
To leave this hole we are in. 
Can we write a new story?
Nothing is happening but nothing
Can prevent this unbecoming glory.
Winning was never an option we
Had considered in the first place. 
But to actually have victory 
Would be kind of the one we call fate. 
This is as complicated as it gets
Food turns to drink in moonlight
But still we cross our fingers and
Hope that a beam could be our spotlight.

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 11:46:00 PM

    Hello Juli, stopping by to visit this one again... ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 12:01:00 AM

    Meager wages, food turning to drink, crossed fingers. You have some great visuals here. I really enjoyed this piece. You drew me in with the title and the gravity of the moon held me captive.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 11:38:00 PM

    The title and the theme superb.I appreciate your far and lovely vision.Nice to read it

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 10:36:00 PM

    wow, This is super love... never thought of writing a poem and giving it such an awesome title.. Moon War,, hope the results carry a good story, on it's next changing page... truly enjoyed..Linda

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 3:50:00 PM

    Beautiful and serious poem. Good work Juli.

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 2:27:00 PM

    Really interesting write Julie, Thanks for your comment..'

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 12:43:00 PM

    hauntingly beautiful, juli.. thank you for appreciating my piece; your childhood contest allowed me to revisit my young days.. i appreciate this a lot... :) huggs to you!..

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 5:38:00 PM

    Food turns to drink in moonlight:........what a great line that is! Well said ! ps.....many thanks Julie, for my placement in your kid contest! I'm glad to share a bit of childhood with you! Thanks again!