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Haiku 90

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Haiku 90

	
	
	
	Haiku 90
	
	
	what does it mean 
	to be visible and whole — 
	not an abstraction
	
	
	
	

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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:03:00 PM
    I really like this idea. I prefer visible to abstract.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 10/2/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Me too, most of the time... Jack
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 12:30:00 AM
    nicely penned haiku... I fear some in life will never know the answer, they seem oblivious to what is around them while others take everything in...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/30/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Unfortunately I believe it's all to easy for an individual to be an abstraction, that is, a number on a spread sheet or compressed into an anonymous member of the masses... jack
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:39:00 PM
    Nice haiku. (I think the haiku is one of my favorites to write also) Good concept here. Cindy

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 9/29/2013 8:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Cindy. Another haiku enthusiast is a good thing... Jack