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THE TRUEST HEART IS A WALL MADE OF STEEL

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THE TRUEST HEART IS A WALL MADE OF STEEL

It's not easy to realize when everything seems real
that the truest heart is a wall made of steel,
foolish me....I have tried for too long to melt it down
without considering it couldn't be done!


The truest heart is a wall made of steel,
who can ever bend the strongest will?


My time was wasted by chasing a rainbow
that vanished through bright clouds,
and it was supposed to last longer to vow
me until evening brought in its stars!


The truest heart is a wall made of steel,
who can ever bend the strongest will?


It would be lovely to have you beside me....
not thinking the truest heart is a wall made of steel;
isn't temptation a desire that has a delusive feel?
You are faithful to one, I am full of vanity!


Love your sweetheart and forget me...
I've tried to deceive you by falling in love too quickly;
you have chosen him over me by hurting me,
it was by accident you mentioned
your devotion to him, but this doesn't please me.


The truest heart is a wall made of steel,
who can ever bend the strongest will?




Entered in Debbie Gucci's, contest," Song Of Poetry "
Inspired by the song, 
" I can't make you love me if you don't "

Notation:

Don't make the mistake of falling in love too quickly...
ask if the other person is already committed to another...
avoid a broken heart by not trying to melt down
the truest heart that's made of steel.





















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  1. Date: 10/13/2013 9:27:00 PM

    great win......SKAT

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Andrew, Congrats on your placement in the Songs to Poetry contest! I enjoyed!! The strongest metal can be tempered, but yes I agree, it takes time to truly fall in love...love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:10:00 AM

    Great choice for the contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 8:45:00 PM

    Andrew, Awesome Songs to Poetry ... congrats~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:07:00 PM

    great write...one can feel the emotions in your words...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 7:32:00 PM

    Very true words here! Nothing feels quite as bad as loving someone who doesn't love you back! Congrad's on your verse winning! Light & Love