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Season Woven In Grief

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Season Woven In Grief

Persuaded by time,
and clothed in rust,  trees reveal
a changed homecoming...
The illusions of my youth
drift away with falling leaves

My eyes search for him,
although my heart knows better
Old fences need paint,
Scabs of white shed like feathers
from the dry and weathered rails

There, by the back door
his old plaid jacket is hanging,
waiting to be worn...
It holds scent of burning leaves...

A tear smolders on the sleeve




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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
    nice win Carrie, congrats......... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:23:00 AM
    congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:31:00 AM
    Ah the memories of time. Well done. Robert(RabCD)

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:25:00 PM
    I loved this one the first time I read it, it's no surprise it took a win...a big congrats to you :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:12:00 PM
    congrats Carrie, one of the best, stands out from the rest love xxx

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Well done carrie love xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Incredibly beautiful, yet poignant & sad. There was a lot of pain & reflection in this writing. Wonderful job!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 3:19:00 PM
    You rule Carrie, and to pull it together will that brilliant final line

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 8:04:00 AM
    wow...one can't help but feel the emotion in this poem...you paint the scene well! great write!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 10:56:00 PM
    Carrie, I think Susan will really like this tanka set. I love how you SHOWED grief and did not TELL it. that makes the poem so much more interesting. Thanks for sharing your story of the drive in fog. I have been in several such situations and always it is scary!!

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Very good Tanka here Carrie.Loved how you separated the last line of your poem....

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Carrie, this is yet another stunning, gorgeous poem from you! I am amazed at your body of work, wow! Adding this to my fav.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 11:01:00 AM
    A fav from one of my bestest poets, I love it to no end Carrie xxx