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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Thomas, it's the simple things that make life worth living and you have captured that here!

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Thomas, i love this world you speak of... perhaps deep in my dream this world built by love will exist with peace and the reality that lives on with excitement forever... You are quite creative poet. love the wonderful imagery... Linda

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:09:00 AM
    a heart so childkike and full of wonder, thomas... you mystify; grreat thrill to read you!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:56:00 AM
    "Lolly shop"- you took me right back to New Zealand. I felt 5 years old again reading this; loved it. Fun read and well-expressed. Great job and kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 6:18:00 PM
    We pass that world from one generation to the next Thomas, and your right, with our love and a wee bit of that yelling lol. beautiful thought here. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 10:49:00 AM
    Ah yes, the innocence of a childs world. So easily forgotten. Nice write! And thank you for stopping by and commenting on some of my writes. Much appreciated. :o)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:00:00 AM
    This one, Thomas, is adorable, and a really fun read!!

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 2:19:00 PM
    - As always a pleasure to read your sweet poem, Thomas ! - Continue with cute thoughts, thank you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 11:06:00 PM
    Thom, this is very cute and sweet. You captured the innocence and fun of youth. Oh, to be that young again and carefree. I can always be a kid at heart. In fact I am. LOL good job

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 11:38:00 AM
    excellent fact , you are great .

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:59:00 AM
    Children are the singing tress of spring, Thomas

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:31:00 AM
    Loved this light verse. If only we could hold onto all that uninhibited joy as adults.