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A Beautiful Reverie

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A Beautiful Reverie

Here I lie beside you
My heart goes thump.thump.thump.
My soul dances inside you
Reveling in the texture of your own.
Electric and flowing 
The currents of our love
Glow like neon lights
Illuminating the hope in my eyes.
Though we're not moving
I feel so incredibly alive
Invincible to my past
Untouchable by all who lack
That gentle touch of when 
You lean in and brush my face
Your lips grazing my skin
Softer than a butterfly.
And then you gaze into my eyes
I fall into your depths 
Twirling like the autumn leaves
Melting into your smile 
Your soul reminiscent of summer.
You pull me into your arms 
And for a moment I'm lost 
Breathless and in awe
Staring in the face of pure exquisite love 
And there you are - holding it 
Glowing in the moonlight of my stare.
My heart beats - its drum pounding away
Echoing a song thats lost its words
I touch your cheek and smile
My hands cant stay away
My lips s l o w l y, draw near yours
Hovering, and then - 
Part, a soft warmth against them.
My eye lids pulling shut
Dragging me into a silent heaven
I pull away - and what seemed millennia
Lasted only a moment, a second in time
But this is our love
This is what you do to me
You make me invincible and fragile
Lost forever in a beautiful reverie.

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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 9:37:00 AM
    The dedication of heart & emotion is deeply intense & incredible. An elegant set of lines.

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 10/31/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :3 Thank you very much!
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:25:00 PM
    No one writes better intimacy Jay - thats a real gift - J.A.B. %

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 10/31/2013 8:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Flirt ;) haha, you know others do. You write intimacy quite well my friend.