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appearation

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appearation

enchanting
upon the reflection
of stillness 
salted droplets
shatter 
in splash

the illusion
on the surface breaks
a dream
in the deep 
one moment
in time

it is the only place
to see awakening
innermost santuary 
of beauty
that is close
to being real

staring at my soul
a reflection
of who i am
my eyes glisten
crystal droplets fall
tumbling down
the cheeks

falling on 
the mirrored me
spiraling in ripples
from the center 
rippling out
at the crossroads
i await you


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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:57:00 AM
    Those Crystal droplets upon the cheek reveals the soul s pulse as you await a heartbeat..awesome

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/30/2013 3:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    in the second beat like an applause thunder a pulse electric thank you heartfelt beautiful
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:22:00 PM
    Your words evoke passion and responsiveness, there fore, I will pluck some words here, and give it another go what you say Liam are you game for another round of dance, un passo doble,

    Rose Avatar Mystic Rose
    Date: 9/26/2013 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    staring at my soul a reflection of who i am my eyes glisten crystal droplets fall tumbling down the cheeks