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  1. Date: 10/16/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Hi Rose, I liked this one when i read it at Liam's site. Like many people Vampires draw me in, probably not for the same reasons. You have both done great on his one, Let's face it you are both very talented poets in your own right so , as i see it, a collab' would have to be good. I like the whole flow of the piece and the fact that it is not overly erotic as some people can go when it comes to even the mention of Vampire. You've picked a brilliant writing partner. Your Friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:31:00 AM
    This is amazing you two. Great work! Very visual and sensual...quite the combination

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:32:00 PM
    This is an awesome poem, Rose, it was dark, yet passionate. I absolutely loved it! This was an excellent collaboration with Liam, well done to you both!...Is this for the "Team Work" contest? If so, I wish you good luck!...Thank you for the kind comments, as always!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:15:00 PM
    A top notch write, you two have created a masterful write here! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and dynamic poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:41:00 PM
    A very, very exotic poem, full of similes and metaphors! great poem my darling Mystic, my love! xoxo hugs and kisses all around for you my love! :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Amazing write... impressed? You betcha, Hugs xoxoxox

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:17:00 PM
    out of this world i see you never got my text sorry

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/26/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    its getting better by the minute
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:05:00 PM
    Yikes......but awesome.....:-)

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Brilliant write, well done both of you...peter