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The fear of life

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The fear of life

The fear of life.

For nine months in warm sweet world
I float there peacefully
Then cast into that birth canal
It kind of frightens me
I feel I’m suffocating
And I don’t know what it is
Too soon I enter crazy world
Far from the gardens bliss.

As light comes shining everywhere
The panic settles in
This world is filled with action
And so much awful din
I feel like I’m in trouble
Yet there’s naught that I can do
It seems this place is crazy
That I’ve been cast into.

Then as I grow from babyhood
And listen to the lies
That all these madmen tell me
Cause they’re not very wise
It seems that something’s wrong with me
My life it feels off key
So the only question on my mind
Is ‘What is wrong with me???’

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:44:00 PM

    What an excellent write Peter! Such a great metaphor and I love how you painted a picture for me with your great word choice!! :) Great write my friend!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 10/9/2013 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sop much Chris, your input is appreciated....peter
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:45:00 AM

    excellent piece of writing peter

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan Date: 9/26/2013 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Liam...peter