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I'll Gladly Pay You Tuesday

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I'll Gladly Pay You Tuesday

I am stuffed up to my gills,
Stomach sated fully filled
Plates licked clean, my palate's dream-
Do you mind to pay the bill?

*Let me ask y'all something: would the last line be better if it read "Would you mind to foot the bill"? Someone let me know! ;)

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  1. Date: 11/22/2013 8:30:00 AM
    Chan This is cute and silly. Makes me smile and chuckle. Your reply to Thom is funny because that's what I thought of when reading it. And think of my nickname from you. LOL Hugs Thanks for another awesome and heartfelt comment on my Loyalty Pledge poem.

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    Date: 11/22/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Every once in a while you'll chance upon a poem of mine that isn't all doom and gloom lol Thanks for reviewing, Sweet Pea! <3
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:25:00 PM
    Hahaha, Funny Man. I like. As are you // I'm sated too // I'll bid you bye with this here hint // afore you invite // a lass for a bite // make sure that like you she's not skint. Licia :-)

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    Date: 9/26/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wrote this last night after a late supper, and I still think I'm full this morning lol Thanks for the creative reply, Licia ;)