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933: Zenith

Painted flesh - I find it trendy Tried to know what effects it had on me Since my thoughts are full of you I even forgot what closure meant I never intended to stay away But oftentimes I get enraged Maybe being together buried itself With its own bravery like what you've said I guess it was a mere diversion "I shall make you a flavor of mine." That's when I'll disclose what isn't clear Or whether I'd get chosen in the coming hours In my thirst I found you were earned And I tried to forget what the occasion was My words are echoing yours and they're favorites of mine They can't disappear in the vastness between us You know these inaudible screams Shall be heard from some pasts Even if we can never keep up With the rushing of our companionship I then held this emptiness close Even honored it as if it were dear sin Maybe staying together hinders itself From rising from its zenith like ourselves You left your wings on the pavement So I counted the feathers Which are equal to the number of steps You took backwards away from worth That star above and its peculiar shine Have been addictions of mine Like the way you have been unfamiliar With a carnal zenith that doesn't know shame Parting commandments won't stabilize aims It tames all of them sane Reputations don't qualify us to reunite Because you don't even know how to own I can't reveal what this is causing me Even if these tears are concrete proofs Of that zenith's district, of that brazen hurt That I do not want but stays the same #933: ZENITH ©Jake Ponce [September 18, 2008, 9:17pm] neptunerune.tumblr.com neptunerune.deviantart.com facebook.com/neptunerune

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  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:59:00 PM
    Love this winning poem Jake..... SKAT

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Jake CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda

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    Date: 10/6/2013 10:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    OMG Thanks, Linda! I'll check out "Forbidden" tonight. :) Also bookmarked your blog. :D