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24h of September

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24h of September

The Sun shines upon autumn breezes
The leaves are all waving goodbye
The seasons will soon change yet again
For me, I shall walk along ancient forest paths
Contemplating all the seasons gone by
Each fall brings the end
To dreams that used to be
Whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists
The season of introspection
The season of my birth, and demise
The waterways will flow to eternity
As I shall march onwards bravely
Knowing there in no future
Beyond this wistful walk
Where nature is sure to consume me
Memories buried under fallen leaves

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  1. Date: 5/4/2014 10:30:00 PM
    maybe it is my mood tonight but i could feel being consumed by nature. i love that whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists. :) oh look i just read ur comments guess i'm not the only one who liked that ;-P

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 5/4/2014 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, this poem was personal so means more to me!!!
  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Outstanding imagery and word use... '...whispering loves, mingle with tainted mists,' cool assonance and alliteration! BRAVO Arthur!! Best wishes, Keith

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 5/4/2014 10:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Keith, missed this, haven't seen you around lately, I hope you are in good health and doing well!!!
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:56:00 AM
    Nicely done! Thanks for your lovely comment. "Where nature is sure to consume me. Memories buried under fallen leaves" I can see myself writing this type of imagery with great depth.- Definitely my favorite line! ?

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 9/29/2013 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Dark Mistress
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:45:00 PM
    Great write, loved it ....Seren