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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:17:00 PM
    This poem is amazing and the descriptions are very chilling! I loved it! I am a fan of the darker poems such as this one. Excellent work, Nette! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Wonderful picture drawn on Halloween. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Awesome, awesome!! This is exactly what I go through whenever I'm forced to buy milk at a Walmart on a Saturday afternoon.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 6:13:00 AM
    YES!! A Halloween surprise for all of us to reel into and enjoy! I truly loved reading this wondrous and ghoulish write! I do have to point out that you are missing a line Nette, there should be a line that rhymes with debris towards the end of the poem my friend! This poem is so good I didn't want it to be incomplete! Especially if this is for my contest! Sorry if I read this and it was for my contest, but you should know you are one of the best poets that enter my contests! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:26:00 AM
    .I tell you this; beware of fright undone Pray, I'm one of them watching you, so RUN!" Wow Great Expressions love the meaning of the poem" JCMT....

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:10:00 PM
    Excellent, I'm sure Russell will love it, very scary!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Nette, you have stepped out of your comfort zone here, and have concocted something utterly frightful and delightful, xxx

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 2:44:00 PM
    Ow gee ...Our sweet Nette has turned herself a rising corpse..Ow gee..Still running...You are so sweet..I love your scary sonnet dear : ) Spooky ..eerie and scary!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 1:29:00 PM
    My imagination is sort of freaking out and I'm liking it because it is eerily atmospheric. The images you have put forth with your words are excellent.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Scary Halloween work..If for a contest, reads like it could be winners' list to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:10:00 PM
    I was turning pale at the beginning and more pale with the surprise ending. Are you a ghost writer ( pun intented in a nice way).Shades of terror brilliantly done.