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Dark memory

As darkness 
eats into the soul
In memory of
Rustling inside 
dark untold
I met a woman 
who gave me hell
A broken heart 
one dropped and fell

She stole the insides 
straight out of me
Another man held 
her on his knee
She was telling him things
That  she never told me

Crying upon 
a lonely bed
Not a word to 
anyone was said
A burning hurt 
into one's chest
Broken dreams 
must put to rest

Deep inside 
rattling in one's cage
Killed the heart
I dig one grave
Then depart
Upon the stone
Carved these words
i died this night 
over you

In the spirit 
one of peace
Flying on wings 
of a dove
dying this night 
with you
one love
no more

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:58:00 AM
    :( Why is it that those are undeserving are loved? I never understand. Lovely write....

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:45:00 AM
    This is sad, but good. Some loves are not meant to be. You are young and have plenty of time left. The right girl will come along. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:06:00 AM
    we all have to be careful who and what we choose to love. thanks for sharing ~always pd