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Dragon Heat

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Dragon Heat

She wrapped her legs around the Dragon
She felt the fire deep within the beast.
With her strength she ruled this pagan
On his glowing heart she wished to feast

She felt the fire deep within the beast
A blue flame rose up within her core
On his glowing heart she wished to feast
There was nothing that she wanted more

A blue flame rose up within her core
This pleasure she could not explain
There was nothing she wanted more
All of his thoughts invaded her brain

This pleasure she could not explain
In the end she had to let go
All of his thoughts invaded her brain
She was left with a translucent glow 

In the end she had to let go
With his strength he ruled this pagan
She was left with a translucent glow
She wrapped her legs around the Dragon

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  1. Date: 11/30/2013 2:56:00 AM
    this is an enteresting style of poetry.. i should learn more.. you filled my saturday afternoon, mr.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/30/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dindu, it is an old form that has lost popularity but I like it.
  1. Date: 10/3/2013 5:49:00 PM
    Sometimes as much as we love, we have to let go for one reason or another. Fascinating write Rick, woven to perfection. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Good morning Richard ! I nissed reading your poems this week...feeling inspired again :) Thanx for the lovely comments, tons and tons of gud wishes and hugs ....:) I read this poem....i loved this pantoum but i am a die hard fan of ur terzanelle !

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:00:00 AM
    I can see the blue flame of her glow And I can feel your Dragon power Another spell bound beauty, and a show of your suave skills, keep up the excellent writes Richard, love peace light xxxx

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/26/2013 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Rose, I love how you express your thoughts!
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:25:00 AM
    cryptic it is, rich... you went into many directions but held it tight in the end..raw passion!..:) huggs

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/26/2013 6:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Nette
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 8:41:00 AM
    Hi Richard....I did read this piece yesterday but was honestly stumped for what to write as a post...As a literary piece of work, of course, you now I love your work; however, the imagery was very raw...especially the pagan bit...I was trying to understand whether there are hidden meanings...i don't know...a very different piece of work from you....

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/25/2013 12:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I meant sometimes the start of a pantoum leads me in a direction I don't expect. It is a challange to have it somehow end up full circle. I further challanged myself with this one because I rhymed it as well. The rhyming reduces word options substantialy.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/25/2013 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha, I added pagan after I wrote the poem because I needed a word to rhyme with Dragon. Sometimes the starting lines in a pantoum end up leading you in a direction I don't expect.
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 9/25/2013 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:54:00 AM
    YES!!!! Spot on! This piece has some hidden layers to it. Very well done on this. And, of course, anything involving a dragon...count me in.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/25/2013 8:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha, glad you liked it.
  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:25:00 AM
    That was very interesting.. a fairy-tale on fire!!

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/25/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Bindu
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Very beautiful, and they say I am naughty? :)

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/24/2013 11:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Arthur, I had written this for the magic contest but was to late to enter it.
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:00:00 PM
    OH I DID ENJOY YOUR PIECE EXCELLENT PENNED BEAUTIFUL

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/24/2013 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Liam
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:59:00 AM
    Interesting poem, you can draw conclusions from

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/24/2013 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. For commenting Clay.
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:14:00 AM
    1st again. No I am not going to travel I am putting the 5th wheel in a park and am going to live in it. It is huge. 31ft with 2 slide outs. Been cleaning and painting it. Faithful for 27 yrs. now my ex wants me out. Don't care anymore. Love Colleen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 9/24/2013 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It sounds very nice Colleen. Sometimes it is good to ave a fresh start.