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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:19:00 AM
    Even more moving reading this one the second time!

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 7:09:00 PM
    This was like reading a poem of my own. I can relate completely. This is one of those poems, which tugs at our heartstrings...I love the form of quatrain that you used. Wonderful work, Tom!

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
    WOW ! .. I can only say, simply beautiful...... with love ..Ellie

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 6:21:00 PM
    Awwww,absoloutely beautiful,you brought a tear to my eye with this poem,it's very touching.xx

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 3:16:00 AM
    Well written and captivating! Thank you Sarai

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:14:00 AM
    ohh, you move me wiht your honest feelings, thomas.. so, you are a prof to?... i hope you can read your pieces to your studes.. they are so lrically crafted..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:13:00 PM
    there are so many women , beautiful inside & out who would be honored to have you as their Family ..if this is fiction , you are one amazing writer.

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 1:44:00 PM
    This is a very touching and emotional poem.

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:51:00 AM
    This is so sad and beautiful. It made me cry. Sometimes things are not meant to be. This will go to my favs. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:30:00 AM
    Sad poem. The losses we have endured are supposed to give us inspiration but the pain still hurts your heart and missing a loved one is present always. Lovely poem. Betty Thank you for commenting on my work. I really appreciate your thoughts.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 7:16:00 AM
    I'm glad this is an old poem, still I feel the rawness of the emotion accross time.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:55:00 AM
    lovely write ~always pd

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:05:00 AM
    Written with deep emotion..Enjoyed reading this one today..If you want to poet who comments to recomment, you need to go to their page, read one of their works and comment..Most people never come back to a poem unless it wins in a contest so the poet would not know what you have written here..Sara