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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Truth that hurts; sometimes even physically. This is beautiful Thomas. Though a hurtful memory to some; beautiful just the same.

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 8:42:00 PM
    I love this one. Your third and last stanza are really good. It is so true - an unreturned love can crush a heart. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:37:00 AM
    Yes, hearts can be crushed. Whenever I dwell on the times my heart was crushed, I think about the hearts that I broke. I don't think that I was sorry enough then, but I am now. Funny how time and age gives you a different perspective. I love this poem because it helps you to reflect. It's wonderful Thomas. P.S.---You gave me a great day!

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    Date: 11/3/2013 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I bet you have.
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 1:49:00 PM
    This poem was beautifully written, Tom. I loved the lines of your first verse! And, I liked the simplicity of this poem, and how it gets right to the point. I can also relate so well to this, I think we have all been there before! Fantastic poem!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:09:00 AM
    wow, it looks like you have been busy with some new posts. I sure enjoyed seeing this one added to your list of poems.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:59:00 AM
    enjoyed ~always pd