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Life is Sweet in Honey-Hives

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Life is Sweet in Honey-Hives

The Pollen of my life is sweetened-
Passed from bee to bee
Friendly flowers form a beacon
(My Queen beams humble-ly)

I feel alive; so bold inside-
Life is sweet in honey-hives!
Poppies bloom, a serum soon
Beckons forth my Soul to thrive!

*Just wondering if anyone can guess to what I am alluding? I will crown thee an astute observer as a prize ;)

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  1. Date: 11/26/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Chan Chan These words flow so nicely and give the reader a nice feeling of sweetness and love. HHHHMM but I don't have an answer so I don't win the crown. < sad face > LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Battle Of Love poem Huggies and Love Sweet Pea

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    Date: 11/27/2013 6:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, always and forever, Sweet Pea <3
  1. Date: 11/8/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Nice... Like the connection of a honey - bee hive to life ! Sweet smiles :) :) :) .... Saanvi

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    Date: 11/8/2013 5:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Saanvi; much appreciated :)
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Very deep clever write. I give up, I cant figure out what this could be.

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    Date: 9/30/2013 8:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Thanks, my friend. I wish I could tell you right now, but the hint is in the second stanza, and if you are familiar with some of my other pieces, it may click for you. It's one big metaphor for one small, particular thing ;)
  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:58:00 PM
    What a metaphor for the sometimes rare, always coincidental , but (also?)because of that, intense ways life favors us with all different kinds of fortune..... But that what I 'see' while reading your beautiful poetical picture.

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    Date: 9/25/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the read and review, Ellie. I appreciate the kind words :)
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:16:00 PM
    A wonderful piece of poetry there, very nice to read...Peter

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    Date: 9/23/2013 8:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I appreciate the kind words, Peter ;)
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:55:00 PM
    You must be talking about your honey of course, now hand over the Olympian Torch so we can light it flame to flame, beautiful poetry, it harvests the heart with sweetness, so do your lovely comments, thank you xxx

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    Date: 9/23/2013 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol not quite, Rose, though I now see why you thought that. I had intended a double entendre, but not that one hehe. Thanks for the read and review; I appreciate it :)