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Tied to the Train Tacks

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Tied to the Train Tacks

Tell me that you think I'm Special,
While I'm hog-tied to the trestles
As I await the train to crush my pain-
Too many Demons have I wrestled!

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Chan The Man I will hold the demons back from you and stop the pain. No need to get crushed by a train or pinned down by the evil doers. LOL Thanks for another insightful and honest comment on my Mistakes poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/21/2013 8:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This piece isn't very good and is mostly unfinished, I think. It needs to be revised, but thanks for popping by :)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 11:53:00 AM

    you can leave this and build another longer poem around it. A fun read none the less =)

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 10/7/2013 10:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the advice, Tom, and for the review. It's an unfinished and unrefined piece. Looking back, I don't think it was ready for posting, but being an impulsive creature, I did so anyway. I'll come back to it eventually ;)
  1. Date: 9/29/2013 3:53:00 PM

    Your poem here is wonderful though I'd wish that it never had end so soon. Fantastic write from a lovely heart.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/30/2013 8:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Should say ** "One of the many reasons" lol Sometimes I think a word but neglect to type it ;)
    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/30/2013 8:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This is one of the reason I love you, my dear Mustapha. You always offer me the constructive criticism that I NEED and very much want. I see your point; it DOES feel unfinished. I shall have to come back to this one in the future and see where else I can take it. Thanks so much for the compliments and critique; you don't know how much it helps me :)
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:57:00 PM

    Creative words from an archaic angel, have a blessed day, and don't let them demons have the last say love and peace tenfold xxx

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/23/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your sweet words warm and humble my heart; thank you :)