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Emptiness

This after noon today, i am sitting idle since almost last one hour. It keep pinching me to write something to you, but whenever i make my mind towards this i was unable to do so. I am writing this letter i even don't know what to write, perhaps words will find its way it self "So i start". You are not with me, so it felt like i have nothing to say anymore. I am trying hard to think and think but i am unable to think what i want to think. So i am totally clueless today, don't know what to write or what i am writing. Emptiness could be an exact word if i use for this situation?

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  1. Date: 1/21/2014 1:01:00 AM
    Many of us find ourselves where we don't know the words to write and the feeling of emptiness when the well from which creative juices flow runs dry. I liked your write my friend.

  1. Date: 1/17/2014 6:02:00 PM
    Hello Ashan, there is a contest on the site, that asks us to re-write someone's poem, I thought I would use our poem Emptiness, I just need you're permission to enter it in the contest along with you're name and title of you're poem, would you mind if I did, let me know. please leave me a comment as I don't know why soup is not working for me, hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 11:48:00 PM
    A splendid poem in an original new style! Nice to read. D belovd wud b pacified. Pls do read my latest poem too.

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 10:43:00 PM
    piercing though so sadly yet wonderfully essayed.. a lovely gift on feeling blank, ahsan.. huggs

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 2:42:00 PM
    I've felt this way before. Poignant writing... Always, Laura

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 6:21:00 AM
    please check my last poem entitled: Emptiness, and tell me if you like what I did with it, thank you for you're words my friend, you have great depth in your heart, sending my love and hugs xxx

  1. Date: 1/14/2014 5:47:00 AM
    Dear Ahsan, so nice to hear from you again, I would like to re write you're poem here, I will soup mail you later, I was wondering why you haven't written anything since September, I used to love reading your work, and then you stopped, any chance for a new poem by you? will soup you later, take care, and thank you for remembering me xxx