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Leaving the Nest

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Leaving the Nest

What can I tell you?
That it hurts because you left the nest?
How can I tell you
That I have an arrow in my chest-
When can I tell you?
Because I see that you too feel stressed
Why should I tell you?
When you know me best
And our deep feelings can`t be truly expressed
By poems, novels, stories and all the rest 
Yes, there are some things
That don`t need to be confessed 

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  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:00:00 AM

    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:31:00 PM

    It's almost a monorhyme. I really like this but it seems more like for a lover. Usually when I think of someone leaving the nest, it's a gown child. Did you mean it as a child by chance? It can also be a man. A creative way to show that.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 7:59:00 AM

    Creative write.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:17:00 AM

    DEEP AND BEAUTIFUL WRITE I CAN RELATE

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 3:18:00 AM

    hi, Vesna, when my daughter left the nest..I felt destroyed. sad, after reading this I wonder how she felt. deep write. ..xox..linda