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  1. Date: 10/8/2013 10:58:00 PM
    This is a sad tale of a child's play toy that is forgotten. Nice job

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    Date: 10/9/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:40:00 PM
    likd it

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    Date: 9/24/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/23/2013 6:32:00 PM
    great personification. Now you gotta do George of the Jungle as a park ride!!!

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    Date: 9/23/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:51:00 PM
    Nice personification of the Jungle Jim

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    Date: 9/23/2013 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 9/22/2013 2:24:00 PM
    oh, so sad! it's true - children rarely use those jungle gyms anymore. i love the fact that you personified this one...

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    Date: 9/22/2013 4:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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