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With the Dawning Light

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Below is the poem entitled With the Dawning Light which was written by poet Eileen Ghali. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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With the Dawning Light

I lean against the railing
Drinking in the setting sun
The breeze dances in my hair
The day will soon be done

I feel your arms around me
Your body pressed against mine
I lean back on your shoulder
Drink in your scent like wine

Your lips linger on my neck
I let out a gentle sigh
“Come inside, my sweet darling
Let the moon rise in your eyes.

I know I’m often busy
Love making seems so rushed
Tonight I’ll take things slow
In a room tranquil and hushed.”

You turn me round to face you
You claim me with a kiss
“Oh, come with me, my darling
Let me fill this night with bliss

You give me all that I want
You never withhold my due
Tonight, lie back, my darling
Let ME make love to you.”

You carry me to our bed
And gently lay me down
I close my eyes and sigh
As your hands undress me now

“Just let me love and hold you
Let me ravish till morning light
In liquid warmth of sweetness
Is where I will pass this night.”

I feel your hands caress me
I feel your lips of fire
I faintly hear your murmurs
As I’m taken by desire

Tenderly, gently, slowly
You tease my receptive mind
Knowing full well, it is there
My fantasies you will find

I listen and I follow
I surrender as I'm lead
Tonight you want to give
Tonight I will be fed

Passion has shut my eyes
Every touch...magnified
Your lips kiss away my tears
When in release I have cried

I finally resurface
Your hand toys with my damp hair
Your lips give a longing kiss
Of your need I’m now aware

I croon softly in your ear
“Let desire now take flight
Come in to me, my darling
Come now with the dawning light.”

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:44:00 PM
    luvd it vry mch tc ~V~

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:19:00 AM
    A captivating piece.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks Ndaba. Glad you liked it!
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:06:00 AM
    You, the sunrise. Him, the sunset. Together, making it rain. Gorgeous!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Drake....this post is sheer....sheer....magic! LOVE IT!!! Thanks for the visit. I've missed you!
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 2:54:00 AM
    Passion at its best:) I enjoyed reading this poem Eileen!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    AT IT'S BEST...Yes, this write would suggest that! :) Thanks for the lovely visit, Bindu! Hugs
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:06:00 PM
    A lovely poem filled with passion, very enjoyable to read, thank Eileen...peter

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ever so much, Peter. I'm glad you could pass by and bring me joy!
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:52:00 PM
    Yes, very passionate thoughts nicely expressed, Eileen

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks ever so much, Dr Ram. A pleasure to have your visit.
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 4:11:00 PM
    Cranking up the passion here my little Desert Orchid, a very beautiful write indeed, where do you get your inspiration lol. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dear Mr Seal....So glad that you could manage to pass by and visit my work...I have missed your posts on Poetry Soup.....My inspiration? I though you knew better than to ask that, Mr Seal....One never will kiss and tell....Do take care!
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:25:00 PM
    sizzling with every drip of your lines,eileen... the heat is one; gorgeous!..:) huggs

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Awwwwwwwwww...........thanks, Nette. Very very sweet of you to post that lovely comment. Hugs
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 12:32:00 PM
    DRINKING FROM THE SUN HOT AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Even your posts are romantic! ;) Thanks for the visit, Liam....
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Hi Eileen, A provocative and sensual write... Regards, Ken

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you...two great adjectives... :) I appreciate your post :)
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Love in boom, an young period. Beautifully penned. Loved always, bl

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) Thanks BL....Love must bloom, indeed! Hugs
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:49:00 AM
    Hello Queen of the Passionate Pen !!!! Another great write!!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A title I bear with joy! :) Life cannot be lived without passion, can it? Thanks for the visit, Arthur! :)
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:16:00 AM
    The guys are right, you are awesome with passionate poetry. Enjoyed this one, Eileen. hugs, Catie :)

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Sweet Catie!!!!!!!!! That is very kind of you! :)
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:50:00 AM
    I agree with Jack! You are the Queen of the passionate pen. You never dissapoint.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YOU are my forever contest judge, Richard...Your opinion is what I go by.... :) If you say I'm the Queen of the Passionate Men...what more could I ask for from any contest judge? Thanks!!!
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:16:00 AM
    So so descriptive... this passionate poem about love! Absolutely no one writes about passion as you do, my dear Eileen! Love and warm thoughts, Kenny xoxoxox

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali
    Date: 9/23/2013 9:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Awwwwwwww.....how absolutely lovely and sweet of you, Kenny...HUGS HUGS HUGS. I take pride in this post. Yes...I'm a walking passion power house! HA HA HA HA! Love ya! Hugs