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Navigating the Stairs

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Navigating the Stairs

School Rules: signed permission to stay after for the game.
Jake sits on the stairs a'wond'ring if he'll take the blame.
You see Jake had no note and because he made no fuss,
I sent this kindergartner home alone on the bus.

Mom with her boyfriend live upstairs at 409 Heath;
Dad and his second wife reside downstairs underneath.
Four kids under ten, four adults under twenty-five
navigate the outside stairs; trying to stay alive.

Brother forged his note and now he's at school with the key;
Dad's at work and Mom never gets off before three.
Thank God for caring neighbors who keep watch on the stairs,
they drove Jake back to school and then stayed to watch the Bears.

If only I had known that this fam'ly had no rules;
if only they had cared to find out about the school's.
Mom was angry with me.  "I want Jake out of her class!"
I was mad too, envisioning mutiny en masse.

I paid a visit to 409 Heath just to see
what was the real issue and why she was blaming me.
Waiting on those same stairs, sensing a terrible ache -
I chose to say the words, "Sorry, it was my mistake."

The door flung open, just because I admitted fault
and because I let it go, she felt free to talk.
I learned about her "rules" as I listened to her cares, 
taking just the right steps, we navigated the stairs. 

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  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:11:00 PM

    Truly, narrative, with brush strokes of warm colors (must be your touch), and I am impressed again.. Bravo R.P. G.

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 10/1/2013 9:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Giorgio, true story and one of my more memorable events from teaching when I realized I didn't always have to be right. Wish I had learned it earlier in my career.
  1. Date: 9/23/2013 8:41:00 AM

    I have to say I loved the first poem I have just read from you. Lovely, smart twist.

    Poteet Avatar Reason A. Poteet Date: 9/24/2013 9:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gerald, so glad to make your acquaintance in a positive way. Appreciate the read and the comment.