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big sky in a box

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big sky in a box

and so we gather here 
like some poetry reading without a voice to hear :

this is where we validate our selves.
this is where we bear our musings.
this is where we extend our gestures.
this is where we comfort our despair.
yet these are all assumptions,
for this is where we’ll soon bury our dreams;
this is just our lives re-imagined.
this is where we look back over our shoulders.
this is where we settle for good.
whatever you read doesn’t matter,
we’ll be all in here together.
they’ll never get out.
this is the place they’ve chosen
for their words and thoughts to breathe
and later cease to exist.
otherwise, we have to look up to them too.
understand that this is not a stepping stone,
you ain’t going nowhere.

this is us —–

you reading me.
me reading you.

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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Hi Anggo, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 6:54:00 AM

    Welcome to P-Soup, Anggo ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 2:43:00 AM

    Anggo-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@