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Four Hours of Eternity - Part 2

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Four Hours of Eternity - Part 2

I opened my eyes, I was standing on the Shuffleboard deck; talking with my new "Dad"
Mr. Adams. On the main deck a few feet below, my Bride, my Life. my Beautiful Wife; Lenore stood by the railing of the deck. She sent me a seductive covert wink that made my loin twitch. Mr. Adams what time is it. You can call me Dad now, it's 7:14, Why. I don't know, I was just wondering. I caught Lenore's eye and raised my glass,our first
private toast. She tossed her long auburn hair over her  shoulder and nodded her approval. "Nubbies come down here Please", Sorry Dad my Forever Calls  "Mom, Dad, Ma
Rock, Family and Friends. This has been the most Wonderful day of my Life. Harry and, I thank all of YOU for Your Blessings,Your Love, and Your Gracious Gifts. Befor Lenore and I go I would like to Toast all of YOU for  a new Llfe, new Loves, and a new beginning. Thank-You Everone.  In showers of rice, we run to the Bridal Suite.I carryLenore across
the threshold of our Eternity. We close and lock the door. Bleep, Bleep, Bleep,Bleep!!      

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 6:04:00 PM
    This is touching - onto the next - Always, Laura

  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Wow, wow, wow. outstanding part one-Three.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/20/2013 7:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am adding you to my favorite poets list.
  1. Date: 11/20/2013 7:24:00 PM
    Oh Harry..my heart is beating hard against my chest because I fear what part 3 is.....

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:04:00 PM
    Ow Harry..I wish I could feel glad to read such well written poetry but Somehow I feel so sad knowing what would follow on that ship..And again i have misty eyes..It all came back to you in hospital ..Didn t it..It will always be with you cause you re still so in love with your wife.Im touched.

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 7:54:00 AM
    amazing Harry, your poetry needs to be archived to enable others especially those of the future to get a real feel for our generation.... just love this...

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 4:37:00 AM
    Enjoyed and thanks for sharing these happy memories, HG