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As Seasons Dance

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As Seasons Dance

Wing footed  winter’s dance is of grey skies,
bare branch silhouettes in silver gowns 
dormant magic within icy poses 
brilliant halls bedecked with frosty flowers. 

Into the Grand Ballrooms of springtime
a sweep of pastel ball gowns - all awhirl
Fresh pirouettes agleam with  sparkling dew
To bring alive the dreaming garden songs.

Until the partners change at summer’s start
Now  gowns sway green- as green as willow boughs
And all the maiden’s heads are strewn with flowers
While love renewed replaces all past cares

Then as the leaves turn slowly - red to brown
All regal shades of velvet now adorn
The dancers bow - the way of beauty flown
Their hearts have pledged a promise to return.

Suzanne Delaney


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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:18:00 PM

    love the win Suz.. LOVE --SKAT

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:07:00 PM

    Hello Suz, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 12:51:00 PM

    Lovely, Suzanne! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 9:35:00 AM

    Wonderful piece,Suz...Great write..Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest..

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:48:00 AM

    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:02:00 PM

    No need for an apostrophe. You have a plural not a possessive seasons. Joyce

  1. Date: 10/19/2013 10:00:00 PM

    This was a sure winner SuZ. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 11:16:00 PM

    a very vivid picture, which of course I have learned to expect from you. I would use an apostrophe with "season's" in the title here.

    Delaney Avatar Suzanne Delaney Date: 10/8/2013 9:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Robert ....when I first posted this one I had an apostrophe But it kept saying no special characters allowed in the title.....will try again. Perhaps TPS has changed that in the upgrade. SuZ
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 8:57:00 PM

    I could almost invision the figures partipating in the dance of the seasons changing. Loved the words that painted the pictures, nice job !

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Marvelous freeverse personification of nature. Engrossing entrancing seasonal spells portrayd!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 3:27:00 PM

    So, may I have the next dance? Beneath a shower of Maple leaves...Then we could rake those leaves in a pile and dive in...Beautifully done my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 10:45:00 PM

    Awesomeness!! wish I could have cut mine down to a size like this one. You captured each season wonderfully.

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 11:04:00 PM

    SuZ this is so beautiful and sentimental! Thank you for writing - I missed your poems for a while. Good luck in the contest, G. :)

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:28:00 AM

    beautiful write Suz...best wishes

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 3:17:00 PM

    this one sways like a twril of season's flight so stunningly rendered, suZ... just awesome!..;) huggs

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 11:00:00 AM

    - A really beautiful poem,SuZ! - Luck in contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Beautiful invocation to Autumn as we call it to this season, Suz

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 11:20:00 PM

    Oh my gosh, Suz this is so good! I love the dance theme for the seasons... very creative write, I enjoyed it. I think it should do very well.