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Its No GoOd

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Its No GoOd

I must have had a head like a sieve
Or was I just simply misunderstood
It's mad she'd take and me I'd just give
Being made to feel like I always Should

Bad, but no one sees how you really live
Especially when everything turns to Crud
Now a sorry looking lad or a bit of a dive
But I tried the best that I possibly Could

Stupid I was just a tad, being too sensitive
Though not letting the tears cause a Flood
And am I glad, that her I am no longer with?
When she would always treat me like Mud

Now in a single pad it's even more depressive
Never thought it would end up being a Dud
As I still feel so sad, and more apprehensive
Yeah believe me right now it is not so Good



Some bits like words no good inspierd by my poem a bad case of nostralgia
kind of looking back how I feel now and then had idea for this for quit a while 
just working on other writtes some bits also taken from age of life
this I tryed to do in same pattern as WORDS  WONDERER  IN MY ROOM
KALIDOSCOPE  EVOULVER ETC NOT LIKE SUBLIME AND ONE OF A KIND
WITH THIS i WAS TRYING TO ADD TO OF TH RHYMING WORDS 
IN LINES 1 AND 3 WITH OUT DDING SO MUCH CONTENT 
SOMTHING DIFFRENT AS i KNOW ALOT OF MY WRITES TENT TO BE VERY RHYME 
INSPIERD BY ALL THOSE COOL POETS WHO ALWAYS COMENT ON MINE
WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT JUNE JULY 2012 -FEB MARCH 2013




 

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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 6:18:00 AM

    I'm a great believer in giving, but also in expecting nothing, that way though tears may flow, it's a case of easy come easy go. love Elizabeth