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SmOkEr JaCk

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SmOkEr JaCk

What this guy dose every single day
Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack
I tell him if you want to keep on this way
Your life expectancy, is a heart attack

But never listens to any given warning
Smoking, he's got a bad chest again
And you can hear him every morning
Choking he now is, coughing up flem

With all those poisons and every toxin
Isn’t it enough your hair and nails yellow
I say to think what you are actually inhalin
He's like puff after puff, inhale and blow!

But then it don’t matter whatever you say
He will always tell you it's his last Pack
It is what this guy dose every single day
Smokes like a chimmly, Smoker Jack. 





I did use to smoke a lot myself not just cigarettes but the old mj too im sure i mentioned
breifly in age of life poem and othe things in my teens twentys 
maybe now just being high on life or though  dont think id qit everythong a drink now and agin is good
and of course there sex mybe were all druges how many of us drink tea every day  or coffee
this was more a joke towards brothin law  as he is like one after another 

this kind of croped up as I was writing other writes another and time

without really thinking losly put togeather   not alot of content or much sffort
WRITTEN BY   MYSELF DAVIDSCOTT        2013   INSPIERD BY POETS ON SOUP,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,xx 

note UPDATED A LITTLE BETTER CONTEXT CHANHED TITLE ALSO   THIS BASED ON A FRIEND 
INSPIERD BY AT TIME,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,1996

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