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ENTICING RED ROSE

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ENTICING RED ROSE

                                                   white diamond dews 
                                          soft petals dripping with sweat
                                                   drifting to the earth

                                                     enticing red rose
                                             nourishing beauty of dawn
                                                  sun's aura smiles on

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 2:04:00 PM

    This is a very sensual, if not lustful, read. Enticing...dripping...sweat...And that paired with the nature imagery is very interesting.

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 10/7/2013 8:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks my friend for your visit to my page and for lovely comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/22/2013 5:11:00 AM

    BL superb haiku so enjoyed reading Shadow x smile

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/22/2013 10:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi! my friend, thanks a lot for your beautiful comment, Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 9:18:00 PM

    Very well executed haiku here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/21/2013 11:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks for your visit and for your comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:06:00 AM

    This was damn beautiful. "White diamond dews"...absolutely!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/20/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot for your visit and for very nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Beautiful description, BL

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/20/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks.......................,my friend. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:52:00 PM

    glwowing, glowing, bl... you have mastered this form with your ' aha' moments... enticing!..:) huggs and thanks for coming around!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/19/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Multiple thanks for your inspiring comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:36:00 PM

    Absolutely amazing! :) Great write...passionate and sweet!

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:28:00 PM

    - BEAUTIFUL!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 9/19/2013 12:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks............., always loved, bl