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He'll Be Comin' Round the Mountain

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He'll Be Comin' Round the Mountain

Through inclement conditions, to haul this load
En route to trek for Peace of Mind
A ton in weight rides winding roads-
An Everest of the Soul to climb...

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 4:59:00 PM

    Chan my friend This is interesting and unique. I will help you climb and lesson the weight on your mind and soul Thanks for another honest and great comment on my Love Condition poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 12/21/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much, hon <3
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:18:00 AM

    ha ha a different track to what i thought it was. . .

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/20/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, took it in a different direction, for sure lol ;)
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:06:00 AM

    Its difficult not to love your work. You're truly a gifted writer. Well done!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/20/2013 6:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Mustapha; I feel the same about you, my friend :)
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 4:42:00 PM

    Let's climb it together, poet!

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet Date: 9/20/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate that sentiment, Gerald :)