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Nairobi acrostic contest

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Nairobi acrostic contest

N ows here the place Joy Adams was chased
A s the lion cubs let loose followed her scent
I n haste through stores and stalls in riotous glee
R ight to her they led George he begged her to stay
O utwitted in her ploy to go she tried again to leave
B ut the lion cubs sure had other ideas and circled her
I nstead she found  that no way could she leave them 

written 09/19/2013

contest skipping six,Going Straight to Seven- Acrostics challenge #3

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 2:05:00 PM

    Nice imagery

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 10/23/2013 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Susan Ty for nice review and your precious time spent reading Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 10:21:00 AM

    Wonderful acrostic poem with a short story penned well. Enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/20/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Ty BL as usual your review is very inspiring Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 7:59:00 AM

    Beautiful poem! Loved it!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:26:00 PM

    love how this one tells the story...great write...good luck in the contest :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/20/2013 2:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi Sandra a great book and film when I choose Nairobi I thought of many things I could write but the cubs chasing Joy through the street stall and store is unforgettable especially when one has stayed there many times Ty for lovely review and luck wishes Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 3:32:00 PM

    A great little story, told with so few words, wonderful. write, thanks Shadow...Peter

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/19/2013 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Peter watch Living Free and you will see the mayhem lol ty for your review Shadow x smile
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 12:36:00 PM

    not only is this imaginative but downright vivid... a fine story this one weaves, shadow..:) huggs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/19/2013 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it was filmed in Living Free It also did happen lol. Ty Nette for reading Shadow x smile