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Warm thrill, brief unforgettable moment, Mario De Paz 11,19,2013

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Warm thrill, brief unforgettable moment, Mario De Paz 11,19,2013

That field of wheat
Gilded by sun
Cherished by wind
Tender received
Our bodies
Quivering.
A warm thrill
Down in my back,
In my bones,
While embracing her
In the field of wheat.
A warm thrill
Is now quivering
Down in my back
In my bones,
Thinking
To that field of wheat

italian version:
Brivido caldo

Quel campo di grano
Dorato dal sole
Accarezzato dal vento
Morbido accolse 
I nostri corpi 
Frementi.
Un brivido caldo
Scese nella mia schiena,
Nelle mie ossa,
Mentre lei abbracciavo
Nel campo di grano.
Un brivido caldo
Sta ora scendendo 
Fremente
Nella mia schiena
Nelle mie ossa,
Pensando 
A quel campo di grano

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  1. Date: 12/25/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Ahh such precious thoughts ones mind and heart holds sweet friend! So beautifully romantic...I love this beautiful tender write of the heart.:)

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 12/26/2013 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for appreciating. I am not writing many poems, but I try to express genuine senses
  1. Date: 11/30/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Unforgettable indeed! Well crafted with lovely imagery :)

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 12/1/2013 5:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Karen, for visiting and for positive comment
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 10:29:00 PM
    That is an unforgettable moment...congratulations on your win..

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 11/30/2013 10:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, it was indeed. Thanks,
  1. Date: 11/29/2013 12:12:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in: - BRIEF, UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT / / Nette Onclaud contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2013 6:37:00 AM
    to be in a moment like this is simply divine, mario... if for me, kindly add name, contest title and date of poem.. :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
    love your poem Mario, and yes the Italian version, without understanding, comes across some how, very powerful...

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 9/26/2013 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for commenting so positively. Sometimes my memories help to write a poem where there is something of myself inside....
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
    A beautiful poem Mario - I wish I could read it in Italian - Italian sounds so romantic. - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    DE PAZ Avatar Mario DE PAZ
    Date: 9/19/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne Lise. Sometimes I feel romantic and then I write what is passing in my brain