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Dear DAD

Oh Dad
You didn't smile! 

You were trembled, and tired
And.. feverish, you were! 

Your eyebrows arched 
And your lips tight 
And I didn't smile.. 
Oh Dad..! 

You were anxious, 
you swallow the fear
For the fear on me
Oh dad..
While, I was growing up! 

Aah my little heart.. 
If you were a herb for his cure.. 
I would surpassed my heart
Before the death, block your 
Eyes from me..! 
Fatima Nusairat

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  1. Date: 10/5/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your great win....

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Great work, Fatima! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Excellent, Fatima. Congrats. Ralph

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:03:00 PM
    nicely penned...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Fatima,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Excellent description , Congratulations on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 5:09:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Fatima

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Fatima, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 3:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win, Fatima!

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:54:00 PM
    Hello Fatima, I wish I could tag your DEAR DAD poem with one of my own.. enjoyed... :) Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~ Linda