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Oh Cupid

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Oh Cupid

Oh Cupid you chubby little boy,
put down that weapon and go get a toy.

Oh Cupid you chubby little thing,
don't shoot at me, my heart will not sing.

Oh Cupid you chubby little brat,
find someone else to shoot your arrows at.

Oh Cupid you chubby little imp,
you're rubbish at your job, you're a no good pimp.

Oh Cupid do as I said,
or you'll get no supper and go straight to bed.

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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 10:03:00 PM

    A creative write you have presented here. The rhyme iand flow are very good. I only find one fault in your composition And that word is "pimp. I believe that a better alternative would be "shrimp". It would not change the overall piece and would not imply criminal activity. I do like your poem and enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 8:13:00 PM

    That has me smiling eat to ear, what a great write!!!!!!

    brewer Avatar Jenny brewer Date: 10/14/2013 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    glad you enjoyed it xx thank you
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 8:02:00 PM

    lol lots of fun to read. Indeed move on cupid....=P

    brewer Avatar Jenny brewer Date: 10/14/2013 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hi thomas, thanks.xx
  1. Date: 10/4/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Wow lovely imaginative poem, unique eh, cupid, a winsome title and yeah i cud give him a few words too but u were better. Do pas by my latest.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 5:18:00 PM

    Hi Jenny, A most charming write from you.. Ken

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 3:21:00 PM

    And little Cupid did none of it! Shoot right through so she can write another poem tomorrow!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:47:00 AM

    lovely, poor Cupid.