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Surreal Nature

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Below is the poem entitled Surreal Nature which was written by poet Seren Roberts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Surreal Nature


The woods welcome me, listening to the silence of nature, waiting for the raucous sound as I disturb the sleeping inhabitants, smiling as through the early mist I spy the bewildered eyes of the tree inhabitants as they hold on tightly to the swaying branches that a squall  has caused. Looking down through squinted eyes I carefully place each shoe, trying not to destroy natures carpet, grass wet, with glistening  morning dew, a bathroom for all insects, and a water fountain for many.  Mice run hither and thither  wary of the birds of prey waiting to swoop from the branches above, they are looking for not wanting to be breakfast.

pools of new morn dew
ready to revitalise ....
boosting energy

I see nature as though in a dream a palette of natural colours, blending itself so not even the drab looks dull, the many shades spells nature at its best, mesmerising me, a visual collection of art for the taking.

colours of living
autumn shades announce deaths  knell ......
small shoots await spring.



Penned 18 September 2013

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  1. Date: 5/5/2014 7:12:00 AM
    I'm glad i choose this one of yours to read this morning. what a beautiful collection of words it brought the scene to my eyes so perfectly!.

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:00:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/30/2013 2:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 1:13:00 PM
    Hi poppet I'm back congrats on another win sweetie I don't know this form xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/30/2013 2:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi you will have to try it, lol.
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Seren,, awesome Haibun. Have yourself a sweet day.......... LOVE SKAT .

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/30/2013 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank u
  1. Date: 10/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
    congratulations Seren...pd

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 7:40:00 AM
    hi Seren congrats on a fine win Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:02:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Seren

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:41:00 PM
    you painted a picture as lovely as nature itself...congrats on your fine win :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:40:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Seren

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
    This is a truly beautiful write..........it "boosted my spirit" just as you mentioned boosting energy!! :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 6:08:00 PM
    Fantastic work, congratulations.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/24/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Richard many thanks ..Seren
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:14:00 PM
    A colorful beautiful poem Seren, congrats on your win xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/24/2013 6:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose cant believe i was placed with it ..Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:10:00 AM
    Wonderful, you show nature so vibrant and alive.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks again Monterey...Seren
  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:09:00 AM
    Beautiful nature poem, Seren. Wow, I am seeing some amazing poems for this contest. I gotta get on the ball!!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yea yea yea Andrea have heard that one before, bet you have something brilliant in the offing....Seren
  1. Date: 9/20/2013 6:09:00 PM
    beautifully penned haibun :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra many thanks ... Seren
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 7:34:00 PM
    This is one of my least favorite forms, but you have someone managed to do magic here, very beautiful!!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/19/2013 7:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, was my first attempt.
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 12:20:00 AM
    This is my favourite form though I have not written one. I am in search of a good prose, or write one so that I am write a Haibun. enjuoyed

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 9/21/2013 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ram